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Very nice writing. You follow the cardinal rule of Micro writing: Every word does a job. I agree with Kathy about the ending. The barn setting is vivid; to end with ". . . like a grub on a summer l...
Like this. The last couple of lines here are particularly gold.
Kathy, Thank you, thank you! Your glowing review of "Quitting" made me very happy.
Emily, this is great! Really nice kicker in the ending! :-)
Nice one, Matt. Excellent images.
Keep writing, girl. You don't need an MFA or a bunch of professors to validate what you do. Writing comes from within you--like lava, draw from that energy every day and make them eventually realiz...
Susan-So nice to see this poem again-
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This is great!! So, do the Griot Grrrls have any relationship to the (very excellent) Gorilla Girls? Do they also wear masks and crash art openings? :-)
Tried your suggestion for cleaning up the format on the one just posted. You're so right. It came off much better than before. I'll do the same tonite on the earlier part. Thanks again...
HA! Love that last line. Love how you drop right into the scene and the conflict here. I love this clean, unfussy writing that doesn't bury the story. Well done, Jack.
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